I may very well do :D
The way it looks now, it cuts from first person anecdotes to traditional speech bubbles quite a bit. Might have to sort that out, so it's not too distracting.
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Bourbon Fox Bourbon is a moron,
Mon 11 Jun 2012, 20:04,
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Yes
I enjoy getting pedantic about that sort of thing.
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Yo 'Ho of Charlie mass-market saucetrepreneur,
Mon 11 Jun 2012, 20:15,
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Or leave it as it is and just say it's your style.
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Mu Dinofiddler,
Mon 11 Jun 2012, 20:15,
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It's almost like Rorschach's sections in Watchmen, but somehow more deranged.
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Bourbon Fox Bourbon is a moron,
Mon 11 Jun 2012, 20:33,
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Is this what you intended?
If not, is it actually a bad thing?
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Mu Dinofiddler,
Mon 11 Jun 2012, 20:34,
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It wasn't intentional at all.
But it is by no means a bad thing. I'm thinking of cutting it down a bit though.
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Bourbon Fox Bourbon is a moron,
Mon 11 Jun 2012, 20:45,
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If you've never read Kurt Vonnegut's Breakfast Of Champions
It might make you feel a little better about playing fast and loose with style. It's really fun to read psycho jumpy stuff where you honestly don't know what the author will do next.
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Smoked Oysters Yes, magick helmet! And I will give you a sample!,
Mon 11 Jun 2012, 23:33,
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