very good indeed!agreed with the other suggestions up here:
- tart up the S&M gimps.
- put the tooth on a big fluffy bed
- more red and pink, more light, more obvious associations with sex
- fishnet stockings on the tooth roots?
- maybe make the floss into a cat-o-nine-tails, tie a knot in the end and make it more obviously whip-like
- the box of floss could be sweating more through exertion
- obvious whip marks on the tooth?
I could go on...
And change the title, perhaps, to When Brushing Just Isn't Enough. The word 'alone' is slightly ambiguous, and has associations with (e.g.) showering alone, being alone etc...
(- tart up the S&M gimps.
- put the tooth on a big fluffy bed
- more red and pink, more light, more obvious associations with sex
- fishnet stockings on the tooth roots?
- maybe make the floss into a cat-o-nine-tails, tie a knot in the end and make it more obviously whip-like
- the box of floss could be sweating more through exertion
- obvious whip marks on the tooth?
I could go on...
And change the title, perhaps, to When Brushing Just Isn't Enough. The word 'alone' is slightly ambiguous, and has associations with (e.g.) showering alone, being alone etc...
revmoola was thinking about a software problem,
Mon 29 Oct 2012, 19:24,
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