Well it's on the front page nowso you'd better tidy it up :)
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chthonic,
Mon 27 May 2002, 16:36,
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well QUICK!tell me how to make it funnier! I think maybe all the punctuation is confusing.
maybe if I did it in 3 lines. maybe if I changed the wording. hmm.
(maybe if I did it in 3 lines. maybe if I changed the wording. hmm.
zog why change it now?,
Mon 27 May 2002, 16:41,
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I'd drop the 'SIR' jokeand just have 'Very funny, Mr Copperfield, now change me back... David... David?'
(The problem is they share a first name so it isn't obvious who is speaking at first)
((The problem is they share a first name so it isn't obvious who is speaking at first)
chthonic,
Mon 27 May 2002, 16:51,
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