very nicei like the way you've given it an ambiguous hollywood-type ending, no doubt two sequels (shot back-to-back) are in pre-production as we speak...
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djol,
Fri 5 Sep 2003, 0:22,
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i might do another poem in an hour on a different subjectbut probably not
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Sunshine Elephant,
Fri 5 Sep 2003, 0:23,
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