
Well, this is my first post here, so I thought I'd post up this picture.
It's not much, but I'd like some feedback.

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Tue 10 Dec 2002, 20:21,
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It's not much, but I'd like some feedback.


everyones stopped to look at him!
woo!
it beats the hell out of my first on friday
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Tue 10 Dec 2002, 20:30,
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woo!
it beats the hell out of my first on friday

he want's to marry my daughter
She's on her way now...

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Tue 10 Dec 2002, 20:40,
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She's on her way now...


The pic's pretty large (not good).
Not obvious what you've done to start with (good).
Seems shopped a little badly on to the scene (not good).
You should try to match the blurryness of its surroundings, so that domokun looks as blurred as the signs round him.
Also, the background is very bright, whereas everything else is a little washed out.
Also.. it's an in-joke which can be good or bad... some people may say "So what?" others will say "Domokun! Yay! Woo! Houpla! Panowie! Awww yeah!"
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Tue 10 Dec 2002, 20:34,
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Not obvious what you've done to start with (good).
Seems shopped a little badly on to the scene (not good).
You should try to match the blurryness of its surroundings, so that domokun looks as blurred as the signs round him.
Also, the background is very bright, whereas everything else is a little washed out.
Also.. it's an in-joke which can be good or bad... some people may say "So what?" others will say "Domokun! Yay! Woo! Houpla! Panowie! Awww yeah!"

it's the idea, not the quality that counts. perfect photoshopping won't make a shit idea funnier.
and in-jokes are good. this is b3ta, after all. we're one big in-joke.
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Tue 10 Dec 2002, 20:38,
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and in-jokes are good. this is b3ta, after all. we're one big in-joke.