
Too much whitespace and a bit too big for the board,
Think about shading and shadows, perhaps the signs could to with some shadowing and maybe the boy's forehead?
I'd maybe have taken the yellow writing out if the top sign with the clone tool.
Really nice work on the sign text though, the shaping of the letters is very good.
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Tue 9 Oct 2007, 0:47,
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Think about shading and shadows, perhaps the signs could to with some shadowing and maybe the boy's forehead?
I'd maybe have taken the yellow writing out if the top sign with the clone tool.
Really nice work on the sign text though, the shaping of the letters is very good.