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# Prod
I hope you don't mind but...

...'which makes is easy to arrive at my job with a smile on my face'.

You switched from MY to YOUR. Keep it personal with 'MY'.

If I received that I would give your application priority over all others.
(, Mon 21 Jan 2008, 14:14, archived)
# haha urgh..I changed that!!

fixed :)x
(, Mon 21 Jan 2008, 14:17, archived)
# For the final flourish
I suggest you change the entire font to Comic Sans.
The font of professionals!
*scarpers*
(, Mon 21 Jan 2008, 14:21, archived)