it just needs that final layer of interest. the spoken word thing will work but not as well as something melodic.
The final melody layer is always the hardest in my experience.
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colmcq2, Thu 16 Apr 2020, 13:59,
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I've sent the mixdown to a mate
that's handy with a guitar (when I say handy, I mean virtuoso, I hope he has time for this..)
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c_kick or, as some people call him, Thu 16 Apr 2020, 21:31,
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