That last line doesn't scan.
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evil_andy Stick stick stick stick sticky sticky stick stick, Fri 13 Nov 2020, 10:01,
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Yeah
'Knowing my freight will not be with you' or 'Knowing my freight will not get to you' both do though
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My Name was saying these words inside your head on, Fri 13 Nov 2020, 12:34,
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You need to amend the second line then
That doesn't scan either
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The_cold_stare Coming here only when very, very bored, Fri 13 Nov 2020, 16:04,
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