OK
As Nasty Willow said in Buffy:
"Bored now"
Harsh I know.
If you're going to do anything long, especially on Youtube, then you have to grab the attention of the viewer in the first 30 seconds. You didn't manage that. Plus, your opening dialogue was scratchy as fuck. It's not a shot to camera or live video so there's no excuse for muddy sound.
I might watch it all when I have some time but, on first impressions, it needs some work.
Cheers
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Legless Mister Stabby - shanks for the memory, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 14:08,
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I liked "Bad" willow :)
Keep looking for a cheap box set of buffy.
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Cerebus Sticky! Sticky! Stick! Stick!, Tue 16 Aug 2011, 14:30,
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Was
trying to keep the mud and grit for later on. Does need a bit of jazzing up in the first cupla minutes I see that now.
Still working on my production skills, just starting out I am, just starting out.
I like how the local paper (Pioneer) is going to print the link this thursday and the guy hasnt watched it yet so He doesnt know what he's submitting for print. Joy Joy. Cheers for the feedback matey, keep posting the great stories
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