Bad DatesTell us about your least successful date. Arrive late? Forget their name? Show them goatse on your phone just as the main course arrived? Or was it the other way around?
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chthonic, Thu 17 Oct 2013, 16:27)
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if she's been fatally wounded by the bullet then he can't show her anythingalthough the story isn't clear as to whether the gun shot is fatal, i am still uncomfortable with this as a closing line
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The Doveston haunted by the memory of his own amnesia, Wed 23 Oct 2013, 15:19,
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this works but i think it impacts the narrative which now seems a bit lacklustre(
The Doveston haunted by the memory of his own amnesia, Wed 23 Oct 2013, 15:26,
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