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"Here in my car", said 80s pop hero Gary Numan, "I feel safest of all". He obviously never shared the same stretch of road as me, then. Automotive tales of mirth and woe, please.

(, Thu 22 Apr 2010, 12:34)
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Fourth sentence
C+. Must try harder.
(, Tue 27 Apr 2010, 11:00, 1 reply)
Well Done MatJ
You seem to get them quicker than anyone else

(Tips cap)
(, Tue 27 Apr 2010, 11:42, closed)
I don't know why
It's something in the style. They don't quite read like narrative.

Edit: I've had a think. It could be because they have less scene setting than most of the stories here - some specific details in the introduction would be better.
(, Tue 27 Apr 2010, 22:35, closed)
Ta
Will make note of that for future ones.
(, Wed 28 Apr 2010, 15:28, closed)

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