There are many reasons
why I clicked this ("Great Menopause Massacre of 2000" and "strained like a constipated sphincter", for example) but that last line is not one of them.

:(
( warmfuzzies Isn't here, Thu 11 Dec 2008, 13:59, 1 reply)

Hmm, constructive.
I see what you mean. It doesn't need it does it? *removes*

Thanks Fuzzy!
( Boss Keloid Got your mother's maiden name tattooed on my arm, Thu 11 Dec 2008, 14:03, closed)

*wonders what got removed*
Great story though *clicks with tongues*
( Captain V, Thu 11 Dec 2008, 14:11, closed)

@ V
Just a line about a Hellbus that was neceassary and detracted from the ending.
( Boss Keloid Got your mother's maiden name tattooed on my arm, Thu 11 Dec 2008, 14:15, closed)

Oooh no I didn't mean that!
I guess I meant the second-to-last line, the one that made me boke, and the one which in fact is still there :(

(As unhappy as it makes me don't delete that too! It's kinda crucial to the impact of the whole thing... urgh)
( warmfuzzies Isn't here, Thu 11 Dec 2008, 14:18, closed)