I can't really add much to what Che & Mme Poulet have said
but the thing of putting it away for a while and coming back to it is always a great one. I've done this with short stories before, where I've become completely stuck or lost interest. It almost always help breathe new life into it.

Also, don't try to write when you've got the remnants of a night of Havana Club running through your head, and only 4 hours sleep to fight it with... I learnt that today.

EDIT: Very rude of me... good story, well written.
( Moey, Thu 3 Jul 2008, 16:04, Reply)