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rob, Sun 1 Apr 2001, 1:00)
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Well doneNicely written, I quite enjoyed reading that.
If I have a constructive criticism to make, it'd be the juxtaposition or similarity between the woman on the beach and the person who's death your character has just been told of.
Are they the same person, or was the woman on the beach a fantasy figure and her disappearance merely a metaphor? If the latter, then your character would be feeling both grief and guilt if that makes sense.
The physical description of the woman on the beach and the accident reminds me of a book I read recently - Random Acts of Heroic Love. But that's not a criticism! Keep at it.
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