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rob, Sun 1 Apr 2001, 1:00)
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@ FredzThat's very powerful but I think I see what you mean about not being satisfied with it.
Have you thought about putting more structure into it?
You've already hinted at that with the repeated last lines. Something like a villanelle would work I think. Dylan Thomas's 'Do not go gentle into that good night' is a villanelle as are plenty of blues songs.
It might work.
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chickenlady b3ta's very own Elizabeth Taylor, Wed 7 Jan 2009, 13:23,
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