Surprise!Herb Alpert's Taxi Driver asks: Ever given granny a heart attack on her 90th birthday or knocked down the wall between the living room and kitchen by mistake before the wife gets home? Tell us tales of surprises and their fluffy and/or messy endings.
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Scaryduck LIKES EGG, Thu 4 Apr 2013, 12:10)
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After serveral minutes of poking around all the children including the now placated Malcom.Guess what I was thinking as I read that.
After serveral minutes of poking around, all the children including the now placated Malcom...
A comma separating the adverbial phrase from the main clause stops you sounding like a paedo.
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The Awful Puppy Bakery is still bored, Thu 4 Apr 2013, 18:29,
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