General layout and presentation...
(It seems adding a blue line here or there does wonders)...coupled with rewording everything, no lies, just avoided negative sounding words or phrases and I removed more than I added in the end.
It's difficult to explain without having a before and after set of copies.
( TN, Sat 8 Jul 2006, 14:08, archived)

Hmm, sounds like a plan
just hope the people at the careers centre are helpful.
( The Mock TurtIe ™ --- Thinks you are a cunt, on, Sat 8 Jul 2006, 14:11, archived)

Have you been through a recruitment agency yet?
They'll usually help rewrite your CV and if you get a good 'un they might just do a good job of it.
( TN, Sat 8 Jul 2006, 14:13, archived)

I signed up to one last week
I'll give that a shot.
( The Mock TurtIe ™ --- Thinks you are a cunt, on, Sat 8 Jul 2006, 14:14, archived)