All you've done there, right, is swap the pronouns around so it's about a boy singing to a girl
Right

And you've also replaced "no good" with "so shit". This is pointless.

And also, what you've done, is rhymed "bone you" with "boner".

It's...

It's just awful.
(__, Thu 2 Jul 2009, 16:03, archived)

Actually, I notice no swapped pronouns in that segment
In the full version, he has done exactly this.
(__, Thu 2 Jul 2009, 16:04, archived)

its the pronunciation
you = ya

You would never make a rapper friz. Or if you did you would be Biggie Smalls.

However, coming back to our song... it has potential if it's accompanied with a stupid video. Instead of some fat fucker on his yamaha keyboard. x x x

Stupidity rocks man. It doesn't need to have sense.
(El Guiri the only b3tan who is not fat, Thu 2 Jul 2009, 16:05, archived)

However, the key rhythmic beat would land on the penultimate syllable of the line
ie, "Bone".

So, you're just rhyming Bone with Bone.

It's Calvin Harris-level turd.
(__, Thu 2 Jul 2009, 16:07, archived)

you fackin' WHAT?!
make sense, man
( manolith hooray for me, Thu 2 Jul 2009, 16:08, archived)

Here's a gaz he sent me:
"ooooooooooooooooooh

ok then do a good one to this song

i think i´m a lot more crude than you.

trumps and vaginas make me laugh. except vagina trumps. they are just WRRRrrrong

p.s. i think mine is funny tho, with someone doing a flash video for youtube"
(__, Thu 2 Jul 2009, 16:09, archived)