Honestly?
Confidence was good.
Delivery, not bad but needs work.
Content was crap. You need some good material to work with.
And at least you had the guts to do it.
( Captn Hood-Butter is not dead yet., Tue 7 Jul 2009, 11:27, archived)

Thanks for that!
Noted.
( jim_bob can herd cats., Tue 7 Jul 2009, 11:33, archived)

Some content could've been ok
like the "that could've been my bike" gag, but the delivery went completely wrong. Mainly due to the flow being interupted talking to the cameraman.
( Edd: The Unfunny Try-Hard Edgelord, Tue 7 Jul 2009, 11:35, archived)

Ah yes, Mr Nick Kinkead.
Bastard said he wouldn't film me. And then he did.
( jim_bob can herd cats., Tue 7 Jul 2009, 11:36, archived)