The fall at the end...
then fade to black...would leave you wondering..
( Herb Alpert's Taxi Driver I have very beautiful lips, Wed 15 Jun 2011, 0:47, archived)

I'm not sure that'd've worked as well

( CowJam, Wed 15 Jun 2011, 1:00, archived)

It would have been good
as you have wondered if it was all fake and a game, or just him being a mental.
( Herb Alpert's Taxi Driver I have very beautiful lips, Wed 15 Jun 2011, 1:03, archived)