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# 'Ning board!
I think I've had enough of this pic, not perfect but not really sure what it needs to fix it. Not bad though, and you don't learn anything new without the odd mistake, huh?
Feel free to make suggestions to improve, or just suggestions in general if you're a numbskull. Back in 5, got to hang the washing up now!
(I helped save b3ta! Jimbuktu See? Right here, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 22:58, archived)
# I like it
but then, I'm a numbskull :P
(JoePesky, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:02, archived)
# :D
Thanks, numbskull!
(I helped save b3ta! Jimbuktu See? Right here, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:08, archived)
# Just checking the symmetry . . . close enough to fly !
(I helped save b3ta! Valin I changed glasses while I wasn't looking, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:15, archived)
# Wibble wobble.
Close! I tend to copy/flip then play and tidy a little matching by eye. Not bad!
(I helped save b3ta! Jimbuktu See? Right here, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:27, archived)
# No wonder you were so close . . . good thinking !
(I helped save b3ta! Valin I changed glasses while I wasn't looking, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:32, archived)
# don't use gradients
the only time a gradient looks good is if it's so subtle you can barely notice it. it looks like you tried to use gradients as shading, but that just makes objects look flatter in the end.
(I helped save b3ta! Shada, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:31, archived)
# This is entirely the effect I was going for though. :(
I wanted an old tattoo/flatness look to it, similar to Sailor Jerry or Angelique Houtkamp. Maybe I'll try shading another way though, see what happens, as I couldn't colour these very well. Interesting, ta!
(I helped save b3ta! Jimbuktu See? Right here, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:35, archived)
# Try shading it with dots, maybe. Or not at all.
Also I'd make the heart a subtler shade of red and do away with the hard black outlines in favour of a softer colour. It might look better if the design was more asymmetrical, too.

And instead of birds, it should be a rabbit and a cat, and they both have guns and are shooting at each other. And replace the heart with a bomb with a timer that says 00:01 and the rabbit and the cat are like "Fuuuuck!"
(I helped save b3ta! Shada, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:43, archived)
# Ha ha ha ha ha
Best feedback ever! :D
I do need to practise with dots, need to find a good tutorial for halftone though on fireworks or at least a way of not doing the dots one by one. I might try this tomorrow. Rabbit and cat you say?...I have an idea. :D
(I helped save b3ta! Jimbuktu See? Right here, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:46, archived)
# THEY FOUGHT UNTIL THEY DIED
(I helped save b3ta! mofaha ┐( ˘_˘)┌ ʅ(́◡◝)ʃ, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:46, archived)
# rabbit and cat deathmatch
boxing golves taped to their paws. Alan Partridge pitch to the BBC.
(JoePesky, Mon 17 Jan 2011, 0:02, archived)
# Haha!
(Mr Eraserhead Why aren't you a lemon?, Mon 17 Jan 2011, 8:27, archived)
# I like it.
what is more, I might steal it for a vid, with your permission. I happen to need doves.
(I helped save b3ta! TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:33, archived)
# :D
It would be a privilege! Holler if you want just one on its own or in a different format.
(I helped save b3ta! Jimbuktu See? Right here, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:37, archived)
# Perfect as is.
Thank you very much. I will, of course, claim I drew them*

*will give full credit.
(I helped save b3ta! TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:40, archived)
# I want to see a sign on them that reads
'All My Own Wurk'
:D
(I helped save b3ta! Jimbuktu See? Right here, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:48, archived)
# If
Herman or Valin are about, i'd give that request about 5 minutes...
(I helped save b3ta! TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:50, archived)
# No, on your vid!
Unless they do your vids for you and you pretend they're yours an' all! ;P
(I helped save b3ta! Jimbuktu See? Right here, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:56, archived)
# I wish they did;
the videos would be better and I'd have more time. I might ask them actually...
(I helped save b3ta! TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:58, archived)
# Arf!
*Sings in Roy Castle stylee* Ooh ooh, Delegation's what you ne-eeed...
De ris for the young: www.youtube.com/watch?v=GilqqHC0SQ8
Warning, may contain best YT comment ever!
(I helped save b3ta! Jimbuktu See? Right here, Mon 17 Jan 2011, 0:03, archived)
# Wow
they look so uncomfortable and falsely cheerful. His smile is completely insincere.
(I helped save b3ta! mofaha ┐( ˘_˘)┌ ʅ(́◡◝)ʃ, Mon 17 Jan 2011, 0:52, archived)
# Nice :)
(I helped save b3ta! mofaha ┐( ˘_˘)┌ ʅ(́◡◝)ʃ, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:46, archived)
# Fanks Mof! :D
(I helped save b3ta! Jimbuktu See? Right here, Sun 16 Jan 2011, 23:53, archived)
# I likes this......
(The invisable man Is having a long lazy soak in search, Mon 17 Jan 2011, 0:09, archived)
# Ta!
And now I'm off to bed. Night board!
(I helped save b3ta! Jimbuktu See? Right here, Mon 17 Jan 2011, 0:22, archived)