
but the background lets it down. I'm sure that wasn't the point, but the second one has surrounding detail which adds the overall effect. but if i had to pick one, it'd be the first. Can I have another go and try and be even more long winded? I only ask because i'm quite bored at the moment and have nothing much to do...
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Mon 19 Aug 2013, 15:14,
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The idea would be to go back and add that to the first sketch style if I settle on that technique.
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Mon 19 Aug 2013, 15:29,
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Mon 19 Aug 2013, 15:32,
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The background itself is indeed identical
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Mon 19 Aug 2013, 15:42,
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yeah, I meant the 'colouring in bit', the content within the outlines.
this is what happens when I get bored, I make-a-no-sense...
the sketchier one, the first one. it has more movement.
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Mon 19 Aug 2013, 15:46,
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this is what happens when I get bored, I make-a-no-sense...
the sketchier one, the first one. it has more movement.

I was afraid I was ruining a very subtle joke.
YES THE DETAIL ON THE SECOND ORANGE SPLOTCH IS TRULY EXQUISITE
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Mon 19 Aug 2013, 15:51,
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YES THE DETAIL ON THE SECOND ORANGE SPLOTCH IS TRULY EXQUISITE

now you mention it... that detail is very... splotchy...
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