Furtive Song
I have written some words for a Furtive song for Koit.
since Furtive seems to be a public property I wondered if anyone had any suggestions for improvement or anthing like that.
Scotland Yard couldn’t catch him.
Nor could the FBI
Interpol were flummoxed
and let him slip right by.
He’s wanted worldwide for his crimes
And his shifty looking stare.
If you see him, don’t approach him
Keep away from Furtive Bear.
He’s a furry fingered fugitive.
A snowy king of crime.
An omnivorous vagabond
A cutpurse most sublime
If you nail it down, he’ll take the nails.
He doesn’t really care.
He appears on all the wanted lists
Look out for Furtive Bear.
He’s wanted worldwide for his crimes
And his shifty looking stare.
If you see him, don’t approach him
Keep away from Furtive Bear.
He’s an Ursine cad of great reknown.
Whose heists defy all sense.
A stealthy footed hairy thief
Whose hoard is now immense.
The planets great detectives
Will never find his lair.
So go and hide your valubles
From the thieving Furtive Bear.
Is he heaven, is he in hell.
He vanishes into the air
He still remains uncaptured
That elusive Furtive Bear.
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Wed 5 Jun 2002, 10:58,
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since Furtive seems to be a public property I wondered if anyone had any suggestions for improvement or anthing like that.
Scotland Yard couldn’t catch him.
Nor could the FBI
Interpol were flummoxed
and let him slip right by.
He’s wanted worldwide for his crimes
And his shifty looking stare.
If you see him, don’t approach him
Keep away from Furtive Bear.
He’s a furry fingered fugitive.
A snowy king of crime.
An omnivorous vagabond
A cutpurse most sublime
If you nail it down, he’ll take the nails.
He doesn’t really care.
He appears on all the wanted lists
Look out for Furtive Bear.
He’s wanted worldwide for his crimes
And his shifty looking stare.
If you see him, don’t approach him
Keep away from Furtive Bear.
He’s an Ursine cad of great reknown.
Whose heists defy all sense.
A stealthy footed hairy thief
Whose hoard is now immense.
The planets great detectives
Will never find his lair.
So go and hide your valubles
From the thieving Furtive Bear.
Is he heaven, is he in hell.
He vanishes into the air
He still remains uncaptured
That elusive Furtive Bear.
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done - I shall do that one at some stage. Thanks for another submission.
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Wed 5 Jun 2002, 11:30,
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