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[challenge entry] My first entry for a competition


well here it is, my first entry for a comp. ever! i dont really like the way it turned out, but im trying again to see if i can make it SUPERIOR, to this one (laaawwl hitler!)

From the Make Sci-Fi Retro challenge. See all 593 entries (closed)

(monnicker recreating the world, one clone tool at a time, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:39, archived)
# please no delete / repost - thank you
did you post this earlier? *goes to check*
edit : hmm you posted this earlier and deleted it and posted it again didn't you?
(I helped save b3ta! SkUG >_O i got a couple of stitches in my eyeball... ow, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:41, archived)
# forgive me for asking this
but wasn't this posted earlier?

if you forget to 'compo' something, you can use the edit button below the post to enter it into the challenge :)
(I helped save b3ta! The Great Architect is still waiting for his account to be deleted on, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:41, archived)
# Didn't you post this already?
Or am I getting even more stupid?
(Paper 'n Pencil Thirst is excellent, even better than I hoped, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:41, archived)
# Bit of both, mate.
(Paper 'n Pencil Thirst is excellent, even better than I hoped, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:41, archived)
# tsk tsk, posting twice?
nawty boy
(I helped save b3ta! Dazz - In Your Base, Killing Your Dudes since, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:41, archived)
# hahahaha
yes i did, but i accidentially deleted it :(
(monnicker recreating the world, one clone tool at a time, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:41, archived)
# accidentally?
by clicking both the 'delete' and the 'yes I'm sure' buttons? ;)

nevermind, welcome aboard and congrats on the first challenge entry :)
(I helped save b3ta! The Great Architect is still waiting for his account to be deleted on, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:42, archived)
# "ahem"
no-body commented
(I helped save b3ta! Dazz - In Your Base, Killing Your Dudes since, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:43, archived)
# How?
There's a confirmation message, divot.
(I helped save b3ta! ClanSoul, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:43, archived)
# Stop insulting people for no reason.
(Paper 'n Pencil Thirst is excellent, even better than I hoped, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:45, archived)
# I didn't mean it nastily :(
It's hard to get my point across just using text.
(I helped save b3ta! ClanSoul, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:49, archived)
# oh come on fella, you've been here a while now to see how other people do it :)
(I helped save b3ta! The Great Architect is still waiting for his account to be deleted on, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:50, archived)
# Mm, I have a distinct feeling of déja-vu.
(I helped save b3ta! ClanSoul, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:57, archived)
# simply read it back to yourself
isn't a divot a hole on the green when your playing glof?
(I helped save b3ta! SkUG >_O i got a couple of stitches in my eyeball... ow, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:50, archived)
# STOP BEING MEAN TO ME >:[
:]
(I helped save b3ta! ClanSoul, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 19:03, archived)
# *puts chainsaw down*
dammit what am i going to do now mr warlord?
(I helped save b3ta! SkUG >_O i got a couple of stitches in my eyeball... ow, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 19:05, archived)
# *points at my ex*
Chainsaw.
(I helped save b3ta! ClanSoul, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 19:40, archived)
# yes, accidentally, im dutch ok!
...
(monnicker recreating the world, one clone tool at a time, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:43, archived)
# You're dutch ok?
I'm English spiffing.
(I helped save b3ta! ClanSoul, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:44, archived)
# I'm Irish y'bastard
(I helped save b3ta! Dazz - In Your Base, Killing Your Dudes since, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:45, archived)
# Hahah :D
(I helped save b3ta! ClanSoul, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:49, archived)
# Then skin up you drug-crazed, sex-fiend!
:P


Welcome aboard!
(Paper 'n Pencil Thirst is excellent, even better than I hoped, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:44, archived)
# hahahaha, that's the best excuse EVER!
*thumbs up*

welcome aboard :)
(I helped save b3ta! The Great Architect is still waiting for his account to be deleted on, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:45, archived)
# spreek engels aub :)
(I helped save b3ta! SkUG >_O i got a couple of stitches in my eyeball... ow, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:47, archived)
# yes im dutch ok!
lol, according to my friends its my excuse for everyhtin XP
(monnicker recreating the world, one clone tool at a time, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:45, archived)
# sadly, ive been on board for a wile now....
jsut enevr did anything :'(
(monnicker recreating the world, one clone tool at a time, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:47, archived)
# well now you've started, don't stop
we're tolerant of the Dutch here, and their accidental, cack-handed ways ;)
(I helped save b3ta! The Great Architect is still waiting for his account to be deleted on, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:48, archived)
# goddomme!
en weer een nederlander die de boel weer verknalt X)
(monnicker recreating the world, one clone tool at a time, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:48, archived)
# top tip : click reply to the person you wish to reply to :)
VVV
(I helped save b3ta! SkUG >_O i got a couple of stitches in my eyeball... ow, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:49, archived)
# wat evaa
:P
(monnicker recreating the world, one clone tool at a time, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:51, archived)
# on b3ta we do not speak 1337
and we pronounce our words properly
(I helped save b3ta! SkUG >_O i got a couple of stitches in my eyeball... ow, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:54, archived)
# *rofl*
(I helped save b3ta! The Great Architect is still waiting for his account to be deleted on, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:55, archived)
# sorry i couldn't resist :D
loffle
(I helped save b3ta! SkUG >_O i got a couple of stitches in my eyeball... ow, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:58, archived)
# you know what?
saying word properly is for people that need to
(monnicker recreating the world, one clone tool at a time, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:56, archived)
# Hahah I like you
(I helped save b3ta! ClanSoul, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:58, archived)
# You see the way there is a reply button under each message...
that's so you can reply to the replies.

(Paper 'n Pencil Thirst is excellent, even better than I hoped, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:50, archived)
# ORLY?
YARLY!
(monnicker recreating the world, one clone tool at a time, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:52, archived)
# Yes, also if you click the little 'I Like This' button under all my pictures
you get sent a cash prize!

Only my pictures, mind.

:P
(Paper 'n Pencil Thirst is excellent, even better than I hoped, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:57, archived)
# so how much of the loot do i get if i do?
cus i am dutch after all..
(monnicker recreating the world, one clone tool at a time, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 18:59, archived)
# I can send you some outmoded Guilders if you like
Just write 'Euro' on top of them with luminous marker and they should be fine.
(Paper 'n Pencil Thirst is excellent, even better than I hoped, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 19:01, archived)
# DEAL!
(monnicker recreating the world, one clone tool at a time, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 19:03, archived)
# Just fill in the appropriate requisition forms in triplicate and pony express them to me at
Jesus, c/o The Pentagon.
(Paper 'n Pencil Thirst is excellent, even better than I hoped, Tue 30 Sep 2008, 19:05, archived)