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# Sorry, some serious arts for your advice.


It a t-shirt design for a half marathon. It has to be orange with a simple design (max two colours).

Your expert arty advice would be gratefully received, in truth I am a ham-fisted spod when it come to arts.

I'm not sure about the phrase. And the purple runner is their logo, I filtered it and feminised it.

Cheers.
(I helped save b3ta! Notorious P I G is deep undercover and reporting back on, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 17:49, archived)
# Vibrant and Positive
i like it
(I helped save b3ta! Barry the Time Sprout one of your 5-a-day, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 17:56, archived)
# This T-shirt is TOOO FAAAAAAST!!!!1
needs some black trim
(I helped save b3ta! (|D[ekionplexis B3ta.com: fictional child porn is OK, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 17:57, archived)
# For the slogan:
"I ran the only way I knew how: by placing one foot infront of the other in quick succession"
(I helped save b3ta! The Coast Of Yemen, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 17:58, archived)
# hahaha
is that from Airplane?
(I helped save b3ta! Damien's Hearse, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:01, archived)
# Garth Marenghi's Darkplace.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=nNfQ0ORwSDM
(I helped save b3ta! The Coast Of Yemen, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:04, archived)
# Hahaha
(I helped save b3ta! epiphany coming live from sweden, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:02, archived)
# Westminster Pandemonium
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(Rattlehead all time with the gay, forever touching, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:00, archived)
# Hahaha
(I helped save b3ta! Christian's Bolt and Ski, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 19:32, archived)
#
The irony is that the painting you shopped had the artist's entry to the 1830s Parliamentary design competition in the background...
(I helped save b3ta! Shrub Rocketeer is a twisted emotional husk, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 20:44, archived)
# I don't know much about stuff
but it looks good to me. One point; if is going to be a transfer type rather than a screen print, those whizz lines will start peeling off within a wash or two.
(I helped save b3ta! TheSundaeLunch I'm a fucking shrub, alright?, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:00, archived)
# I'm not sure I like the layout. You used an identical pose for your two people too, and I'm not sure that works.
Also also I get the idea around the whizzyspeedlines, but I think you should lose them.
(I helped save b3ta! Ttssattsr, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:00, archived)
# Thanks
I used the same pose, because I am too inept to do any different, perhaps I can move some legs about?
Any suggestions on the layout?
(I helped save b3ta! Notorious P I G is deep undercover and reporting back on, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:06, archived)
#
(I helped save b3ta! Ttssattsr, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:16, archived)
# Ha ha, better.
I think its too un-pc, I'd get rid of the word fast, its too competitive.
(I helped save b3ta! Notorious P I G is deep undercover and reporting back on, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:21, archived)
# Oh damn good call. This is why I'm not allowed to work in advertising.
(I helped save b3ta! Ttssattsr, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:26, archived)
# HAHAHAHA!
(I helped save b3ta! Crystal Magnet Like a diamond geezer, but better, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:22, archived)
# Hahahah!!
(I helped save b3ta! Lord Kronos Go Team Pachyderm, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 23:50, archived)
# Sell it to Nike . . . or start a bidding war with all the shoe sellers !
(I helped save b3ta! Valin I changed glasses while I wasn't looking, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:02, archived)
# The runners need more incentive to Keep Going

Raptors make everything a minimum of 56% cooler. Scientifically proven fact.
(I helped save b3ta! Tribs 🦇 ↓ dn ʎɐʍ sᴉɥʇ ↓🦇, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:04, archived)
# Genius. I'll take one.
(I helped save b3ta! Notorious P I G is deep undercover and reporting back on, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:07, archived)
# :D
(herman:D, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:10, archived)
# hmmmmm
magenta?

LOL
(Rattlehead all time with the gay, forever touching, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:13, archived)
# Shame it has to be orange, but I like it, even so.
(I helped save b3ta! Crystal Magnet Like a diamond geezer, but better, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:24, archived)
#
Image and video hosting by TinyPic
(Rattlehead all time with the gay, forever touching, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:25, archived)
# hahahahaha
this!
(I helped save b3ta! Damien's Hearse, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 18:43, archived)
# Hahahahaha
I require twelfty
(I helped save b3ta! Je suis un vagabond is an unfunny, up your own arse middle class knob, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 19:05, archived)
# lol :DD
(herman:D, Sat 6 Feb 2010, 23:27, archived)