I thought that was great, but then I'm 40 years over the target age.
I hope you didn't mention Kafka's Metamorphosis when actually pitching it, that would put most people in TV off - they don't like to think anyone is cleverer than them, it's threatening.
Next time, try getting someone who sounds like John Stewart or Michael MacIntyre to do all the voices. (But don't tell them that's a T.S. Eliot reference)
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