Like the set up
But found the punchline a bit predictable and consequently tame. I think I've seen a few variations on the idea before maybe so anticipated what was coming.
To move away from that, why not end on a shot of the car with metal spikes, skulls and barbed wire strapped to the front? And the driver laughing maniacally whilst dribbling and shouting "you will definitely die... BECAUSE I WILL MAKE SURE YOU ARE DEAD"... or something.
Ideally you want the driver to be played by Kevin Eldon during his Simon Quinlank era.
You can have that for free.
(, Mon 16 Feb 2015, 12:13, Reply)
thanks. this is a fairly old sketch. The Sketch Files is set up for people of a similar mindset to collaborate on just for fun projects. I've been a masterB3TA for a while and thought id share here to give something back.
(, Mon 16 Feb 2015, 12:22, Reply)
Just out of interest...
Why don't you post using your main account?
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Fadgebadger Sweaty sumo wanks for everyone!, Mon 16 Feb 2015, 13:16,
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because i dont want the sketch files to be "me" i want it to be a place where writers, producers and performers collaborate and have a few laughs along the way.
(, Mon 16 Feb 2015, 13:34, Reply)
Yes but
that's your SketchPhile place on the youtube. Here you could post under your real account and still invite people to collaborate. Hiding behind a self-titled sock puppet doesn't help you too much here (most will take it from a spam standpoint). Surely your dedicated account would provide a more welcoming response?
Unless you're a total cunt?
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Fadgebadger Sweaty sumo wanks for everyone!, Mon 16 Feb 2015, 13:37,
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I prefer the anonymity. but then again i could just be a massive cunt!
(, Mon 16 Feb 2015, 13:44, Reply)
You are itilliterate
AICMFP
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Fadgebadger Sweaty sumo wanks for everyone!, Mon 16 Feb 2015, 13:48,
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He/She was a old account that got banned
and has since had a few more new ones. I think they all got banned too.
I will peruse your video when I find my headphones.
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Fadgebadger Sweaty sumo wanks for everyone!, Mon 16 Feb 2015, 13:53,
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ha ha i had no idea what you were on about ;-) my old account is my real name. i never posted much but always liked a good giggle at the photoshop genius
(, Mon 16 Feb 2015, 13:55, Reply)
Never realised that they got banned.
They're probably that new whiny loudmouth who recently started posting. I say recently, it was more like a week after itilliterate stopped posting.
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Pig Bodine., Mon 16 Feb 2015, 14:54,
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It's currently The Accidental Troll
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Fadgebadger Sweaty sumo wanks for everyone!, Mon 16 Feb 2015, 15:44,
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