i dont know, its all over the place, i still have a fair bit of it
I can totally post the first paragraph
( Lisette von Falcon, Fri 15 Jul 2011, 20:41, 1 reply, 15 years ago)

lol nevermind
it's a bit shit
( Lisette von Falcon, Fri 15 Jul 2011, 20:57, Reply)

post it post it post it

( Citizen Cavy Admires your passion for conformity, Fri 15 Jul 2011, 21:11, Reply)

*grumbles*
The sound hit me first. Tires screaming. Brakes locking. The inevitable crunch. It felt as if a thousand needles flew into my ears, penetrating my very being. The scream of the driver. My own blood curdling moan suppressed by the cries of the black birds scattering overhead. My skull was forced back against my own vehicle. I felt the glass crack and pinch threads of my brunette hair, the sting as they ripped from my body when my head whipped forward. The car slid swiftly to the right. My knees buckled and I fell into a crumpled mass beside my car. My fingers gripped and scraped at the gravel beneath me. Blood spewed from my mouth. My teeth released it's grip on my tongue and it flapped helplessly behind my lips. "Oh God," I heard in the distance. It took me a moment or two to realise it was my own voice. My lips cracked at the sides as I tried to scream for help. Hands found my face as I slowly leaned to rest on my side. Black enveloped me.
( Lisette von Falcon, Fri 15 Jul 2011, 21:14, Reply)

keep going

( Citizen Cavy Admires your passion for conformity, Fri 15 Jul 2011, 21:15, Reply)

As I opened my eyes I was immediately thrust back into my own personal horror. "Don't close your eyes!" He tapped lightly at my cheek, his skin cold and unfamiliar. "Shhhh...." he soothed as I let my terrified voice moan delicately in the night. "Shhh....don't leave me. I have you...don't leave me now!" He shouted as I was thrust upward and he carried me swiftly to his shattered vehicle. I barely felt him lay me onto the back seat before I felt myself fade out again. "No," he growled from the driver's seat. I jolted into the leather as he slammed onto the gas pedal and I felt my heart flutter as it struggled beneath my chest. The tears flooded from my eyes involuntarily, leaving a sticky salty glow across my face as the blood thinned beneath it. Pink water flowed across my lips and dripped onto the black carpeted floor.
( Lisette von Falcon, Fri 15 Jul 2011, 21:18, Reply)

and...
is there going to be sex in this?
( Citizen Cavy Admires your passion for conformity, Fri 15 Jul 2011, 21:20, Reply)

There's some somewhere I think.
The thing is....is that my computer crashed and I hadn't been saving it properly. So I lost a chunk at the end. I haven't read all the way through in a few years. It's from '08.
( Lisette von Falcon, Fri 15 Jul 2011, 21:23, Reply)