SpoilersThe Hedgehog From Hell says: "I shared a house in England with a couple of Germans in 1999. I was watching Star Trek: Deep Space 9 on BBC2. One came into the room and saw Jadzia Dax on the screen and said 'Oh! Is she still alive? You're really far behind in this country.' What's been ruined for you, and how? Apart from QOTW, obviously"
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Scaryduck LIKES EGG, Thu 6 Jun 2013, 13:29)
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That first sentence could do with some re-arranging of commas and possibily an "and", for a start(
emvee cruor deo cruoris, Wed 12 Jun 2013, 16:35,
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Best not to start with an andunless you need a and with something
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edjogs Collared doves are shit., Wed 12 Jun 2013, 16:47,
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