Dude, just for reference...
In your title...

Please include spaces and vandelisam should be vandalism.

Capital letters cost nothing. Nor do spaces following full stops.

You didn't go to school - we can see the results.

Slagheap does not require a space.

Between in and me you need a comma. An apostrophe in "it's would also be valuable. How did you keep the rabbit population on it's toes?

You noticed, not noteist, and crept, not creeped. Again, the repitition of & is inappropriate.

Why was the woman pissed off? It wasn't a rape, surely.

Bored, not board. The, not this.

Panic, not panick.

Moaning, not moneing.

Explain, not explane.

Explain the damage to his wife? Was his wife there? Perhaps you should consider improving your sentence structure.

And you missed the full stop at the end. No doubt I've missed stuff but you really should go to remedial lessons, you dumb twat. If you can't write, or tell a good story, fuck off!

Love

Disasterprone.
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