"You're doing it wrong"Chthonic confesses: "Only last year did I discover why the lids of things in tubes have a recessed pointy bit built into them." Tell us about the facepalm moment when you realised you were doing something wrong.
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Scaryduck LIKES EGG, Thu 15 Jul 2010, 13:23)
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You'reone syllable short in your first and last lines so yeah you're doing it wrong.
(second last line too but that one scans ok)
(, Tue 20 Jul 2010, 12:06, 1 reply)
SecondedThe stresses are all wrong so it won't scan no matter how you arse around with the timing.
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