
(It seems adding a blue line here or there does wonders)...coupled with rewording everything, no lies, just avoided negative sounding words or phrases and I removed more than I added in the end.
It's difficult to explain without having a before and after set of copies.
( , Sat 8 Jul 2006, 14:08, archived)

just hope the people at the careers centre are helpful.
( , Sat 8 Jul 2006, 14:11, archived)