No.
Cos that doesn't fit.
( Maffers I flow kinda strange like Spina Bifida footprints, Sat 9 May 2009, 11:02, archived)

The card you used to pay, doesn't expire till next year
The card you used to pay, doesn't expire till next year
The card you used to pay doesn't expire
used to pay doesn't expire
The card you used to pay, doesn't expire till next year
:)
( Three Dog Man, Sat 9 May 2009, 11:04, archived)

No.

( Maffers I flow kinda strange like Spina Bifida footprints, Sat 9 May 2009, 11:07, archived)

it could
if you shortened some of the words.
"t'card you used t'pay does not expire til next year"
(Poppet some assembly required., Sat 9 May 2009, 11:05, archived)

and lengthen "used" = uuuused
and "doesn't expire" is fast
( Three Dog Man, Sat 9 May 2009, 11:07, archived)

Aye
I like you. Have my b3ta babies?
(Poppet some assembly required., Sat 9 May 2009, 11:07, archived)

*bumovulates*
*bends over*
( Three Dog Man, Sat 9 May 2009, 11:09, archived)

/pulls on strap on
/impregnates.

yay. b3ta bubs on the way!
(Poppet some assembly required., Sat 9 May 2009, 11:10, archived)

So what you're saying is...
It doesn't work (unless you change it...)
( Maffers I flow kinda strange like Spina Bifida footprints, Sat 9 May 2009, 11:08, archived)

it's still the same phrase
just changing 'ow you say it.
(Poppet some assembly required., Sat 9 May 2009, 11:09, archived)

That sounds like an Obamanism
I'd go with "phrasing it properly" ;)
( Three Dog Man, Sat 9 May 2009, 11:16, archived)