
The hairs are a little long and not very curly, they look more like cat whiskers.
The shaft is clearly two shades of magenta.
The urethral meatus is too wide (apologies if yours actually looks like this)
There is no line to distinguish the bell end from the shaft
Some jizz coming out the top would be nice, although I appreciate it's difficult with a pale background.
Also just for an added touch of flair a bit of veinage would be good
(For advanced level try signing your name in the veins)
Otherwise it's pretty good effort.
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The shaft is clearly two shades of magenta.
The urethral meatus is too wide (apologies if yours actually looks like this)
There is no line to distinguish the bell end from the shaft
Some jizz coming out the top would be nice, although I appreciate it's difficult with a pale background.
Also just for an added touch of flair a bit of veinage would be good
(For advanced level try signing your name in the veins)
Otherwise it's pretty good effort.