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# Final art of first strip.
I've modified it many times, but i think i got it right this time.

I also got some feedback from Randy milholland, author of somethingpositive.net :D



EDIT: cocknuggets, forgot to fade out the background.
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 16:50, archived)
# HAHAH
*claps*
*bows in awe*
must be good if randy commented
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 16:52, archived)
# yay
you can never have too many comics

beleive me, i know
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 16:54, archived)
# arf
i always call me m8 a girl
his hair is sexy
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 16:54, archived)
# I like
on the third frame they jump to the right. how quaint
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 16:56, archived)
# heh, yeah.
there's a reason.

originally it was bailey there, but after some comments from b3tans, i changed ti script a little and put abbott there.

then after some comments from randy, i put them both there. so the background got mixed up in the confusion.
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 16:59, archived)
# so it's randy's fault!
i like the name randy
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 17:01, archived)
# actually
it's b3tans fault, since some people suggested a little script change in the first place.
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 17:03, archived)
# damn b3tan troublemakers...
i still like the name randy
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 17:04, archived)
# me too.
although, it could get a little tiresome in as a child in school.
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 17:07, archived)
# only for the person named randy.
i think it'd be great fun for everyone else
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 17:08, archived)
# my point exactly.
but it still doesn't reduce the greatness of the name.
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 17:11, archived)
# i can relate to abbot
alot
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 16:58, archived)
# heh,
it's based on me and a friend.

my friend being abbott.
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 17:00, archived)
# Yay!
More of these please!
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 17:00, archived)
# :D
thanks.

i've already planned in my head the next few.

and my friend (who i modelled abbott on) has written a few more. :D
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 17:02, archived)
# Hurrah!
The last frame is great!
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 17:02, archived)
# Thanks
it wasn't all that funny, until Randy thought it ended a little premature and needed a smart comeback.

Randy is my god.
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 17:03, archived)
# My opinion again, if you should want it
but the last line of a comic strip should always be a punchline of sorts (unless it's not meant to be a comedy strip).
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 17:05, archived)
# i agree
but i couldn't think of anything.
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 17:06, archived)
# huzzah
that am ace
(, Sun 27 Jun 2004, 17:02, archived)