I think the hilights should have straight vertical edgesin the middle, where they go across the junction between top and bottom halves of the bullet. They shouldn't curve inwards like that.
Alternatively, the hilights on the top half could be extended and stretched continuations of the curves started by the tops of the hilights on the bottom half. So they'd only narrow as they go towards the top of the bullet, and not widen and narrow again as they do at the moment.
Logic: the hilights are presumably reflections of the same light in both the top and bottom halves, and the top half is a smooth curve, tending towards vertical at the bottom, so just above the middle of the bullet, it should be showing almost exactly the same thing as the hilight just below the middle.
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Sat 7 Jan 2006, 17:05,
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Alternatively, the hilights on the top half could be extended and stretched continuations of the curves started by the tops of the hilights on the bottom half. So they'd only narrow as they go towards the top of the bullet, and not widen and narrow again as they do at the moment.
Logic: the hilights are presumably reflections of the same light in both the top and bottom halves, and the top half is a smooth curve, tending towards vertical at the bottom, so just above the middle of the bullet, it should be showing almost exactly the same thing as the hilight just below the middle.
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Sat 7 Jan 2006, 17:13,
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