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# For my friends birthday card...


Also my first attempt at using watercolours...any constructive criticism?
(, Wed 6 Feb 2008, 19:40, archived)
# more tits
(, Wed 6 Feb 2008, 19:40, archived)
# ^
this
(, Wed 6 Feb 2008, 20:19, archived)
# pupils
(, Wed 6 Feb 2008, 19:42, archived)
# this!
for the biggun.

but good otherwise, maybe, I'm not an expert on lynxes

edit: *finds source photo*
The top of the eyes should be straight, they are hiding the pupils of the big cat in the photo I think.
(, Wed 6 Feb 2008, 19:55, archived)
# This is correct
I'll try and add them when I get over my fear of ruining the whole thing by doing so.

Thankyou for responses, all.
(, Wed 6 Feb 2008, 20:17, archived)
# Why am I looking at a picture of you Pussy?





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(, Wed 6 Feb 2008, 19:42, archived)
# I think it's lovely.
If I have to think of some criticism, I'd say the kittens head is a bit too square.
Still lovely, though.
(, Wed 6 Feb 2008, 19:45, archived)
# There should an an apostrophe in "friend's"
(, Wed 6 Feb 2008, 20:00, archived)
# not necessarily
he could have multiple friends he's planning on sending the same card to. although that maybe should have been written as "friends'".
(, Wed 6 Feb 2008, 20:03, archived)
# Exactly.
Even if I'm wrong, I'm right.
(, Wed 6 Feb 2008, 20:06, archived)
# I do not care for grammar, I'm a scientist.
(, Wed 6 Feb 2008, 20:19, archived)