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# Waited a while to highjack a thread
got bored - sorry work in progress, significant changes have been made.

This is a request for critique.
(I helped save b3ta! WormuIus, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:46, archived)
# is he pushing an invisible desk across the office?
(big fat cocks, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:47, archived)
# the eyes are wonky
for starters
(I helped save b3ta! WormuIus, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:47, archived)
# and i suggest he goes clothes shopping
:)
(big fat cocks, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:48, archived)
# Nice hands!
Probably the best hands I've ever seen drawn!
(I helped save b3ta! Mstandot I suppose I should post more often., Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:47, archived)
# :)
I think my former tutors would probably laugh at them.
(I helped save b3ta! WormuIus, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:49, archived)
# Either sarcasm or you've just made me look like
my opinion was misjudged. v v v :)
(I helped save b3ta! Lazlo Woodbine Panowie!, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:49, archived)
# Sorry Dude.!!!
We all have our own opinions!!


I liek his hands.
(I helped save b3ta! Mstandot I suppose I should post more often., Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:51, archived)
# So who is right, Lazlo Woodbine or Mstandot?
There's only one way to find out... FIGHT!
(I helped save b3ta! Lazlo Woodbine Panowie!, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 22:07, archived)
# I like the detail on the jeans and the strap
but the left hand needs some work.

Other than that very nice.
(I helped save b3ta! Lazlo Woodbine Panowie!, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:48, archived)
# his left?
or our left?

and what do you think needs changing
(I helped save b3ta! WormuIus, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:50, archived)
# His left. I looks a little like he is holding a bunch
of twiglets. But as pointed out up there ^^^ opinions differ on the hand quality.

It could be the lack of shading that makes it looks odd. I will reserve judgement for now. :)
(I helped save b3ta! Lazlo Woodbine Panowie!, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:55, archived)
# i'd recommend jeans with a deeper rise
those hipster really do him no favours.

pic's fine, just go for it who cares what brian sewell thinks.
(I helped save b3ta! god save the queen making another unremarkable comeback, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:50, archived)
# I think the new face has less charm than the old one
www2.b3ta.com/host/creative/39915/1212960773/hassanweb.jpg
(I helped save b3ta! WormuIus, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:51, archived)
# i like the new face
but i still think you should just run with it, flaws and all, it takes years to get proportions right every time, d'vinci wasn't built in a day
(I helped save b3ta! god save the queen making another unremarkable comeback, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:57, archived)
#
The left shoe looks too flat, it needs to be narrower and the toe part needs to curve more. The left side of the trousers waist band needs to curve more as it's just straight and looks wrong at the moment, also you should try making the belt stick out away from the trousers a bit as it goes round his back. The legs need a bit of work as it's quite hard to tell what position they are actually in.

Other than that it's pretty damn fine.
(Jeru War and Piss, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:51, archived)
# Do you think its a case of more definition?
Or does the pose look wrong?
(I helped save b3ta! WormuIus, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:53, archived)
# Well I think it's more that from the trousers the person is being viewed slightly from the side,
but the body is more or less straight on, which looks a little confusing.

I think it's more the left leg than anything, it's quite difficult to tell what actual position it's supposed to be in, you probably need to mess with the shape of the trouser and the folds to get that right.
(Jeru War and Piss, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:57, archived)
# It appears as though
he is wondering where the ammunition is . . .
(I helped save b3ta! Valin I changed glasses while I wasn't looking, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:54, archived)
# he needs a bigger pair of trousers
(I helped save b3ta! Derek Monte subthread killer: qu'est-ce que c'est, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:54, archived)
# His left trouser leg has a hem/turn-up but the right doesn't
and might need slight shading on his bald head above ear
also curve at his right thumb base
Gun stock needs slight shading on pistol grip
The paunch looks perfect.
(I helped save b3ta! CanonCaliber A big bore, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 21:59, archived)
# i think the whole thing will change once the shading/colouring starts
adding a background and stuff is also going to make a hell of a difference
(I helped save b3ta! god save the queen making another unremarkable comeback, Mon 9 Jun 2008, 22:02, archived)