
Have a well-earned clickeroo. \o/
A gold star is also yours for lack of typographical errors and the correct usage of semicolons (my favourite of all the punctuation marks).
Beautiful metaphoric at the end, too! *total glee!* :D
( , Sat 26 Sep 2009, 3:27, Reply)

Unfortunately there's at least one typo in there, which I didn't notice until it was too late to bother starting over. Can you spot it?
( , Sat 26 Sep 2009, 3:43, Reply)

When I was sure you sang "that"...
Overall I think I forgive you, though.
( , Mon 28 Sep 2009, 21:51, Reply)