First rude thing I ever saw
Our Ginger Fuhrer's young life was scarred by the discovery of an end-of-the-pier 'What The Butler Saw' machine and a jazz mag shoved behind a toilet cistern. Tell us about the first time you realised that there was more to life than sweet shops and Friday night TV
( , Thu 11 Aug 2011, 13:07)
Our Ginger Fuhrer's young life was scarred by the discovery of an end-of-the-pier 'What The Butler Saw' machine and a jazz mag shoved behind a toilet cistern. Tell us about the first time you realised that there was more to life than sweet shops and Friday night TV
( , Thu 11 Aug 2011, 13:07)
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First sentence: severe punctuation withdrawal, but made sense.
Second sentence: appears to be written in Martian.
( , Wed 17 Aug 2011, 10:46, 3 replies)
Second sentence: appears to be written in Martian.
( , Wed 17 Aug 2011, 10:46, 3 replies)
So few changes would make such a great difference...
A comma here, a tiny difference in word order there.
Truly, grammar is a fragile thing...
( , Wed 17 Aug 2011, 11:57, closed)
A comma here, a tiny difference in word order there.
Truly, grammar is a fragile thing...
( , Wed 17 Aug 2011, 11:57, closed)
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