i thought it was quite lyrical, myself
it has a certain.... pynchonesque glory about it

oh lolololol, check out the dictionary definition of pynchonesque. it might as well have a pic of dozer and have done with it:

Densely convoluted, verbose and full of allusion
( rachelswipe with a fork, Fri 16 May 2014, 14:04, 3 replies, latest was 11 years ago)

^ never read any Pynchon ^

(dozers, do fuck off ur a nob m8, Fri 16 May 2014, 14:05, Reply)

^hasn't read the full body of work^

( MEATSNAKE Richard Hammond, Fri 16 May 2014, 14:11, Reply)

alright The Disappointed, how's the smack addiction going?

(dozers, do fuck off ur a nob m8, Fri 16 May 2014, 14:12, Reply)

^upset^

( MEATSNAKE Richard Hammond, Fri 16 May 2014, 14:12, Reply)

it's a genuine question m8

(dozers, do fuck off ur a nob m8, Fri 16 May 2014, 14:13, Reply)

You seem a bit upset today? Why are you so upset?

( MEATSNAKE Richard Hammond, Fri 16 May 2014, 14:14, Reply)

on second thoughts, maybe just
ly convoluted, verbose and full of allusion
( rachelswipe with a fork, Fri 16 May 2014, 14:06, Reply)

Perfect!

( Naked Ape call me Caitlyn, Fri 16 May 2014, 14:10, Reply)