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# Poem and illustration. Apols for emo. I wrote the poem in English last year, and just found it.
(CFB)
The boy sits
(silence)
Alone in his room
Bass pounds loud
(shaking him)
Mends a hurting heart...
The girl laughs
(over it)
With her best friends
Cackling laughter
(resonates)
Ignores a guilty conscience...
Sit on a wall
Outside McDonalds
(he's vegetarian)
Talk together
Meaningless chatter
(meaningful to her)
Together for never
But music mends all
(drop dead, gorgeous)
He misses her
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:10, archived)
# I like how you did the tears in the last frame.
(I helped save b3ta! We are the lemon irked your craw on, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:13, archived)
# Thank you!
This was the first time I colored with Corel Painter, and quite like the realisticness of the watercolours, minus the messyness.
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:15, archived)
# quite big for tears, aren't they?
(I helped save b3ta! plentyofants more ghee, vicar?, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:15, archived)
# emo tears are bigger because they carry more sadness :)
(I helped save b3ta! Tom OBedlam I have control of a tank, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:17, archived)
# ^this
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:18, archived)
# *molests* orrite kiddo how do?
(I helped save b3ta! Tom OBedlam I have control of a tank, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:20, archived)
# 'Lo, you!
I'm alright, ta. Last day of school tomorrow. ^_^
And how're you keeping?
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:25, archived)
# hooray
i'm ok i guess. my muse is back in italy and with her has gone my hummus though :( other than that i'm pretty solid. hopefully will find out tomorrow if i have a job or not
(I helped save b3ta! Tom OBedlam I have control of a tank, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:27, archived)
# Aww, damn Italy.
Shoulda gone in her suitcase, really. Is getting a job good, or bad?
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:29, archived)
# Nice food, but too hot.
Plus all Italians are mental.
(Jeru War and Piss, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:31, archived)
# I would have thought
Italy would have nearly the same climate as England, as they're neighbors.
And yes. All the Italians I know (one) are mental. :/
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:32, archived)
# neighbours? do you have geography lessons at school? o_Q
(I helped save b3ta! Tom OBedlam I have control of a tank, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:34, archived)
# ...no.
Hahah.
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:39, archived)
# sure but in an interesting way. not like the spanish.
they're just mental. i'm going out to rome in august to see her. i'm going to die of heat
(I helped save b3ta! Tom OBedlam I have control of a tank, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:33, archived)
# I'd say Italians are mental in the way in which they are mental.
They shout and wave knives around and drive like their face, eyes and arse are on fire.

I can't speak much of the Spanish, but my second cousin's wife is Spanish and she is moderately sane and nice compared to everyone else.
(Jeru War and Piss, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:36, archived)
# you can never escape being italian. only italians know who their second cousins are
and that may very well just be your family. we're yet to have a knife fight
(I helped save b3ta! Tom OBedlam I have control of a tank, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:39, archived)
# I can escape being Italian and do so on a daily basis by keeping up a mixture of whimsy and heady nonchalance.
And actually I don't know who my cousins are apparantly as I just remembered he's my first cousin, it all gets confusing due to the fact that my first cousins are all about 40 and some of their children are older than I am.
(Jeru War and Piss, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:44, archived)
# weeeellll..... bad because it ruins my louche slacker image
good because it means i can start buying things like these www.pennangalan.co.uk/boots/FW112.php
(I helped save b3ta! Tom OBedlam I have control of a tank, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:32, archived)
# Ah, right. Gotta look good to the other slackers.
Hahah, those are pretty awesome. But mine are cooler. :]
See? But I took the straps off 'em.
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:34, archived)
# they're nice but why didn't you get proper DMs?
hot topic makes me so angry. totally unjustifiably. but still very angry. has mofaha ever taken you round camden?

edit: BOOTS these boots rock. 1970s US military issue :)
(I helped save b3ta! Tom OBedlam I have control of a tank, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:35, archived)
# That Gothic Lolita shop in Camden market has a lot to answer for.
I can't unsee the things I saw there.
(Jeru War and Piss, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:37, archived)
# which one? Black rose?
(I helped save b3ta! Tom OBedlam I have control of a tank, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:38, archived)
# Christ knows, I've only been once but there was a lot of cah-razy subculture shit going down there.
(Jeru War and Piss, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:40, archived)
# I'm vegetarian
so I don't wear leather. And they don't make fake leather DMs anymore, sadly. I really dislike Hot Topic, actually, because it's like...everyone always ends up with the same clothes as someone else. Which sucks.
I been to Camden plenty, but I haven't been in to London since before the Camden fire. There was a store that used to be there that sold awesome old school punk clothes, but after the fire it became a Goth Loli shop, oddly. :/
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:38, archived)
# Okay
I have to go outside now. See you later, all. :]
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:41, archived)
# ahhh ok then i'll let you off :) i forgot you know about clothes somewhat
my favourite veggie shoes are macbeth actually. really comfy. the thing that pisses me off with the hot topic scene (we don't have them but that whole sort of buy yourself punk thing is still here) is that its turned punk into a cliche
(I helped save b3ta! Tom OBedlam I have control of a tank, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:44, archived)
# Ugh.
Yeah, I know that feeling. All these kids around here claiming to be punk in their leopard print skinny jeans, and stupid slogan shirts. You're not fucking punk, are you? Just hot topic core.
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 1:16, archived)
# ah, yes, i hadn't thought of that
tellyouwhatididthinkof tonight, though
phil oakey. he basically invented emo-hair about 20 years before the fact. and does he get any credit?
(I helped save b3ta! plentyofants more ghee, vicar?, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:21, archived)
# I just Googled him.
XD
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:25, archived)
# and richie horton invented hitler hair 50 years after hitler died.
coincidence? i think not
(I helped save b3ta! Tom OBedlam I have control of a tank, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:25, archived)
# Outside McDonald's
(he's vegetarian)


Hahaha!

Lovely though... even if it reminds me a teeny bit of Carol Ann Duffy O_O
(I helped save b3ta! Face will put on her red shoes and nrans the blues, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:14, archived)
# Hahah.
:]

And who??
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:15, archived)
# She's a slightly creepy lesbian poet...
We had to study her poems for English GCSE at school.

Some are cool, like Salome, but others are kinda frightening.

Also: having been to a thing where she did a reading, I have come to the conclusion that she really needs to learn how to read her own poems. :)
(I helped save b3ta! Face will put on her red shoes and nrans the blues, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:17, archived)
# Hmmm...
is it good or bad that my poem reminds you of her? I'm thinking probably bad...

Also: I can read! ^_^
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:18, archived)
# this is good, kk
I do like 'together for never'
I wrote a few similar emo crush poems as a teen, for example. Looking at it now, so naff I'm almost ashamed. Yours...much better
(I helped save b3ta! doph no time like the precedent, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:20, archived)
# Thank you.
:]

And oh my...I like yours, but it made me giggle more than it probably should have.
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:24, archived)
# your pity of my younger self is welcomed :o)
though people don't change a whole lot as they get older, just more layers hide the once-fresh ones underneath
(I helped save b3ta! doph no time like the precedent, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:26, archived)
# Hahahah.
Really? I'll remember that. Then I can compare myself when I'm grown to how I am now.
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:30, archived)
# he reads and
(clicks)


i do like drop dead, gorgeous... ah, the wonders of punctuation
(I helped save b3ta! charlie?, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:22, archived)
# Thank you.
:]
(I helped save b3ta! Killerkitti Like my coffee black, just like my metal, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 0:24, archived)
# i'm glad you translated the poem from english into emo for us.
(I helped save b3ta! postbear has metal knees, Fri 20 Jun 2008, 4:04, archived)