I'm almost tempted to write this
Young FreeFare trembled under is duvet, whether in excitement or fear he knew not The way Daddy Monty had been making him feel in recent months was both disturbing and exciting, he found himself wanting things he knew were wrong and yet their very wrongness excited him.

I'm not sure I want to have this in my head TBH.

Edit: beaten to it.
( CQ Knows the truth, all of it., Mon 25 Jul 2011, 17:17, 1 reply, 15 years ago)

I think yours goes before Luggage's
better out than in
( Citizen Cavy Admires your passion for conformity, Mon 25 Jul 2011, 17:18, Reply)

Needs some joining
Slowly his bedroom door opened, causing him to whimper with excitement. There outlined in the doorway stood the silhouette he'd been hoping to see. "I..... I tried to stop myself" stuttered Monty "but I just couldn't resist. The way you stood up for laissez faire Capitalism against all those benders on Off Topic it just... made me want you so much...". In 3 quick steps he was across the room and on top of your FreeFare.

and over to Luggage.
( CQ Knows the truth, all of it., Mon 25 Jul 2011, 17:24, Reply)

Doesn't work with my ending- I have FreeFare over at Monty's.

(The Luggage is haunted..., Mon 25 Jul 2011, 17:36, Reply)

I was going to go the wicked step father route
if I'd carried on building it up, so kicking out in to the snow would have worked, I'm just glad you did yours before I had to decide between doing the grotty bits and giving up
( CQ Knows the truth, all of it., Mon 25 Jul 2011, 17:38, Reply)