I think my presentation is finished. Would anyone be willing to read through it and give me honest feedback?

(dozers, do fuck off ur a nob m8, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 21:32, 3 replies, latest was 14 years ago)

I'd not have anything usefull to say as it's not my feild
nor do I have the energy, but I want to appear supportive because I feel partially responsible for branding you as pretentious.
( CQ Knows the truth, all of it., Wed 26 Oct 2011, 21:35, Reply)

Ha!
I have no qualms about being thought of as pretentious. It's not a bad thing. There's a massive gulf between being wordy without having any understanding of the subject at hand and being wordy.

Y'all knows what I mean, aight?
(dozers, do fuck off ur a nob m8, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 21:41, Reply)

I dunno, can you say it in smaller words?
/obvious joke.

Anyway, It was Berk who called you pretentious, I called you an absolutist.
( CQ Knows the truth, all of it., Wed 26 Oct 2011, 22:00, Reply)

I am not an absolutist.
IN NO WAY AT ALL AM I AN ABSOLUTIST.
(dozers, do fuck off ur a nob m8, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 22:04, Reply)

So you're OK with being thought of as pretentious
because you see yourself as wordy, but not wordy without understanding the subject?
( Kroney, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 22:17, Reply)

I am thick so therefore no use.
Changed my mind.
( girlinthehole, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 21:37, Reply)

Here, have some Mos Def
www.youtube.com/watch?v=B-y-lS0YqF0
(dozers, do fuck off ur a nob m8, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 21:44, Reply)

I love your musical tastes Doze.

( SteveFrench Cardio is for homo's. do you even lift bro?, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 21:46, Reply)

Is that sarcasm there?
You probably wouldn't like my current listening.

Sunn O)))- A Shaving of the Horn That Speared You.

Unless you are into drone.
(dozers, do fuck off ur a nob m8, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 21:58, Reply)

No I fucking love Mos Def!

( SteveFrench Cardio is for homo's. do you even lift bro?, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 22:00, Reply)

I got Black on Both Sides back in the day.
I took it back to the shop to complain- it was orange on one side and silvery on the other.

I should have bought the vinyl instead.
(dozers, do fuck off ur a nob m8, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 22:05, Reply)

One of the first hip hop cds I bought in my teens.

( SteveFrench Cardio is for homo's. do you even lift bro?, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 22:09, Reply)

Mos Def is a thoroughly talented MC.
Excellent flow, conscious lyrics, intelligent rhymes. His stuff with Talib Kweli is some ill shit as well.

I think what helped him so much was that producers were falling over themselves to work with him.
(dozers, do fuck off ur a nob m8, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 22:12, Reply)

Oh, and I also love the Cowboy Junkies.
I have this on right now.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=XyUCxKM1yT8
(dozers, do fuck off ur a nob m8, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 22:08, Reply)

Thanks.

( girlinthehole, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 21:46, Reply)

I'm shattered PD
But send it over and I'll give it a ten minute review for you.
( JeffTheDogFucker Can you dig it?, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 21:45, Reply)

Obviously. Say if you're sending it.

( JeffTheDogFucker Can you dig it?, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 21:50, Reply)

ooh ta babes. on its way.

(dozers, do fuck off ur a nob m8, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 21:55, Reply)

Question - and apologies if it's pointless, I've been up since half three this morning.
One Slide 9, Tax Relief and Inflation, you could be a bit clearer. So make it clear that whilst inflation is a good thing for borrowers, highlight that this related to Andy.

Also, BoE is (I'm guessing) Bank of England. This is a undefined term.
( JeffTheDogFucker Can you dig it?, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 22:05, Reply)

Thanks.
And do I need to define BoE when I am presenting to a financial services company? I'll change it anyway.

Does it flow okay and does it answer the question?
(dozers, do fuck off ur a nob m8, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 22:08, Reply)

If you are presenting to a FS company, you'd probably be fine with BoE - but if presenting to a varied audience you can't assume anything.
Also...

Slide 6 (Risk) you say there are 4 different asset classes, neither the Pension or Mortgage slide say what asset classes these investments are in.

Finally. The graph. It includes a cash-investment but there is no other reference to cash or the rate used in the document (unless I've missed it).
( JeffTheDogFucker Can you dig it?, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 22:12, Reply)

The notes on the graph slide state that cash is there as a benchmark.

(dozers, do fuck off ur a nob m8, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 22:16, Reply)

Sorry missed that.
Just keep reading it and try and work out what the like questions will be.
( JeffTheDogFucker Can you dig it?, Wed 26 Oct 2011, 22:19, Reply)