Right...
Time for a new story...
This one's called "Sleeper".



And the previous story:

( Cawl, Thu 4 Dec 2008, 0:38, 13 replies, latest was 16 years ago)

Creepy and gross
a good start I'd say.
( flirting with badgers What? It sounded good at the time., Thu 4 Dec 2008, 2:08, Reply)

nice work again
you should turn these into songs
( Vipros. clever got me this far, then tricky got me in, Thu 4 Dec 2008, 8:27, Reply)

Creepy and gross sounds good to me :D
Also, my band have specifically banned me from writing and songs about this :(

I'll stick to the ones about murdering people and hiding the chopped up remains in the walls then...
( Cawl, Thu 4 Dec 2008, 9:29, Reply)

I like it
I like it a lot!

*impatiently waits for part 2*
( Labia Majora You keep on talking but it makes no sense at all, Thu 4 Dec 2008, 9:31, Reply)

that's a criminal shame
I'll have a word with your band
( Vipros. clever got me this far, then tricky got me in, Thu 4 Dec 2008, 9:46, Reply)

Oh yes.
Oh yes.
Oh yes.
I can see this being even more exciting than "Rabbits."

I've always thought I'd like to pass away in my sleep - you know, peacefully, like my grandfather. As opposed to kicking and screaming like the passengers in his car _{Sorry it's an old one but it seemed appropriate here and allowed me to procrastinate for another 30 seconds before shunning real work and going back to Zahada...}
(LongJohnBaldry, Thu 4 Dec 2008, 10:05, Reply)

Nice!
Excellent start!
( Boss Keloid Got your mother's maiden name tattooed on my arm, Thu 4 Dec 2008, 10:07, Reply)

I like!
I like very much indeed!
( Devil_In_Tights the *real* DiT!, Thu 4 Dec 2008, 10:08, Reply)

Yay,
Thanks guys :D
( Cawl, Thu 4 Dec 2008, 10:13, Reply)

*grins*
It's real, people. He's not actually making it up this time.
( thealternativefact, Thu 4 Dec 2008, 10:24, Reply)

It needs more red in it.
IMHO : )
( girlinthehole, Thu 4 Dec 2008, 10:27, Reply)

I really like that.
Very atmospheric and intruiging!
(The Empress it seems you CAN polish a turd!, Thu 4 Dec 2008, 10:27, Reply)

Splendid Kaol
An excellent start, can't wait to see where it goes!
(Herr Doktor Lemminge Is bored, so cheer me up!, Thu 4 Dec 2008, 10:40, Reply)