b3ta.com qotw
You are not logged in. Login or Signup
Home » Question of the Week » Off Topic » Post 635206 | Search
This is a question Off Topic

Are you a QOTWer? Do you want to start a thread that isn't a direct answer to the current QOTW? Then this place, gentle poster, is your friend.

(, Sun 1 Apr 2001, 1:00)
Pages: Latest, 837, 836, 835, 834, 833, ... 1

« Go Back | See The Full Thread

Sounds very negative in tone.
There's nothing I'd say was particularly heinous in there, but the whole thing does come off (to me) as a bit tentative and apologetic. You're not wasting his time; you're offering him your services, which he sought out. I'd rewrite the communication to sound more professional, with less colloquial English; just because it's an informal email, doesn't mean it doesn't contribute to his opinion of your professionalism.

Also, there are too many kisses, mostly in the opening. Just put one or two at the end.
(, Wed 10 Feb 2010, 10:33, 4 replies, latest was 16 years ago)
Hahaa!

(, Wed 10 Feb 2010, 10:33, Reply)
He may be a shirter though Monty.
In which case, there are not enough kisses.
(, Wed 10 Feb 2010, 10:36, Reply)
Maybe sign off, "missing you xxx"

(, Wed 10 Feb 2010, 10:36, Reply)
I don't receive enough emails with kisses in
I would like more. The kisses should stay.
(, Wed 10 Feb 2010, 10:36, Reply)
Alright Althegeordie?

(, Wed 10 Feb 2010, 10:43, Reply)
Alright flim-flam
how are your delicates?
(, Wed 10 Feb 2010, 10:52, Reply)
pffft.
i like the cut of your jib.
(, Wed 10 Feb 2010, 10:37, Reply)

« Go Back | See The Full Thread

Pages: Latest, 837, 836, 835, 834, 833, ... 1