Crow has it about right
Your application would go straight into the bin in my place if you wrote what you posted.

Negatives should be avoided on an application.

point out all the positives, any areas of note or particular success and which direction you see yourself developing in (and why).

Good luck
( RadG Drinking Mojitos in the sun, Fri 2 Jul 2010, 8:25, 1 reply, 16 years ago)

What on earth makes you think they were seriously going to put that paragraph on an application?
It's pretty obvious it's an excuse for a rant.
(Bazongaloid, Fri 2 Jul 2010, 8:39, Reply)

I didn't
I simply bothered to read the OP properly and replied to the question
posed

"So, do you think this would be more or less likely to get me an interview?"

Any more blatently obvious things you need help with this morning?
( RadG Drinking Mojitos in the sun, Fri 2 Jul 2010, 8:54, Reply)

But you also read Crows reply
in which he responded to the general tone of the message rather than the exact words, which were clearly sarcastic. Are you actually autistic, as opposed to internet autisms like the rest of us?
(Bazongaloid, Fri 2 Jul 2010, 9:01, Reply)

Yawn
Try shaking a different tree if you want an argument, I have some fish in a barrel that need shooting. Its more sporting than bandying words with internet forum warriors.

Hugs
( RadG Drinking Mojitos in the sun, Fri 2 Jul 2010, 10:00, Reply)