I would say it needs splitting up into several sentences. It's awfully long.

( RR I love you ... in a way, Thu 14 May 2009, 11:04, archived)

It makes me look cool and academic, no?
No it doesn't. Oh dear.
( LimeyTreat Bitch. Lover. Child. Mother. Sinner. Saint., Thu 14 May 2009, 11:08, archived)

Long sentences are good in academicky stuffs
It make good. Me like.
( Theoban What of it, Thu 14 May 2009, 11:10, archived)

if I were you
I'd shout "PISSHOLES TO THIS BOLLOCKS" then go and get drunk right now
( Gilgamesh gazed in wonder as Frampton came alive, Thu 14 May 2009, 11:13, archived)