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# gothic
i felt like writing a goth poem

Pain is crashing down on me.
Agony and hunger cloud my mind.
Rain and thunder raging free.
Over yonder hills i look and find
Death and blackness everywhere
Years go by and still I'm there.

and then i went and posted it here:
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(I helped save b3ta! PoofBird ~V~, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:07, archived)
# I like this one better
ghosts haunt me
old and young
the true pain
hunting down
strap me up
and kill me dead
raging fists
endless pain
succumb my flesh
cover me in blood
and tonight
reign of terror
yes, i obey
(I helped save b3ta! magnum, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:10, archived)
# Crikey 2 first posts on the home page
Newbie tuesday really is working. (unlike me who needs to go back to work)
(I helped save b3ta! magnum, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:11, archived)
# my own favourite is
get under my skin
open up my wounds

wait for the darkness
after the sunset
sunshine is fading
hades is waiting

you are here with me
opening wounds
under my skin
reaching for sin

face me and tell me
are you real?
can you heal me
end my sorrow?
(I helped save b3ta! PoofBird ~V~, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:11, archived)
# Hand to read that twice before I got it
I thought it was something to do with goatse.
(I helped save b3ta! magnum, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:12, archived)
# I love making up goth-poetry, it's soo piss.
Death, Blood, Guts gore TIME
Killing Suicide Murder RHYME
Then I Die, killing my MIND
Murdered Deathed Killed FIND
self obsessed stupid GRIME
Death, Vodka and LIME
(I helped save b3ta! G/PP 💩💩💩💩💩&#128, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:16, archived)
# ooh I like these!
ghosts haunt me
old and young
the true pain
hunting down
strap me up
and kill me dead
raging fists
endless pain
wounds re-open
agony of despair
nurture the agony
kindness always conceals
evil
reliving each moment
succumb my flesh
(I helped save b3ta! thegoose, quietly backs out of the room hoping no one noticed, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:18, archived)
# Yes I love that one
(It doesn't always sting when you piSSSS., Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:24, archived)
# cracking
your a proper krank
(Halfcircle, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:10, archived)
# haha
they didn't even clock!
(I helped save b3ta! applehead herp derp, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:10, archived)
# How do you get a goth down from a tree?
(I helped save b3ta! G/PP 💩💩💩💩💩&#128, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:11, archived)
# Throw rocks at his head
(I helped save b3ta! magnum, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:12, archived)
# i'd rather
let them stay up...

but please, do tell :)
(I helped save b3ta! PoofBird ~V~, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:13, archived)
# Cut the rope.
(I helped save b3ta! G/PP 💩💩💩💩💩&#128, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:17, archived)
# fire a jet of water
at him to wash off his make up and then offer him some fresh face paint?
(I helped save b3ta! applehead herp derp, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:13, archived)
# Fookin' ace
I'm waiting for a goth "rhyme off" on that board
(Fred, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:12, archived)
# Well done
You wrote some little ditty
You thought it was quite witty
But it is at best quite bitty
And mostly rather shitty
Because we'd all prefer a piccy
(I helped save b3ta! TV's Nosemonkey, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:13, archived)
# Calm down dear
B3ta is suitable for "projects". Goth Baiting is a project. Although I can't really endorse trolling.
(I helped save b3ta! magnum, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:14, archived)
# yeah
i don't mean to troll... just some harmless fun to occupy myself
(I helped save b3ta! PoofBird ~V~, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:15, archived)
# If the project pays off, most certainly
But this one sadly didn't.

Don't mean to sound unfluffy, I just want piccies.
(I helped save b3ta! TV's Nosemonkey, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:18, archived)
# oh shush
i have pics enough!

(I helped save b3ta! PoofBird ~V~, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:15, archived)
# That's more like it - have a woo!
And some kisses.
(I helped save b3ta! TV's Nosemonkey, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:19, archived)
#
www.b3ta.com/board/3092296
(I helped save b3ta! supermoore: HUNG, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:14, archived)
# Did you send it to The Horse?
(I helped save b3ta! magnum, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:15, archived)
# Aye.
I'm not going to press him on it though, as I still have to finish an animation I've been doing for him for WEEKS.
(I helped save b3ta! supermoore: HUNG, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:19, archived)
# ha ha
(I helped save b3ta! butchbint, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:17, archived)
# hehe
fucking goths, it would be better if they did top themselves rather than just talking about it all the time
(barandis, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:18, archived)
# Sumbit the thread to the newsletter!
(1, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:27, archived)
# i doubt
it's that funny
(I helped save b3ta! PoofBird ~V~, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:32, archived)
# the other links don't work
(1, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:33, archived)
# fixed
my bad :)
(I helped save b3ta! PoofBird ~V~, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:38, archived)
#
(I helped save b3ta! lo, the Greebo Warrior - Est. 2002, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:32, archived)
# vincent van goth?
heh
(I helped save b3ta! PoofBird ~V~, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:33, archived)
# pfff!
(doctorgeorge It's good to be back, Tue 6 Jul 2004, 11:35, archived)